Proofreading Report Modules August 2026

This report lists spelling, grammar, punctuation, and consistency issues found in the PDF. Some unusual spellings in Orik’s notice may be intentional character dialect and are identified separately.

Page 5 — “Digging Potatoes”

• Description:The → Description: The
• Synopsis” → Synopsis:
• Aardappel's should be Aardappels if plural, or use a correctly formed possessive if intended.
• Aardapple and Aardappel are inconsistent. Choose one spelling.
• 10 count → 10-count
• Number of Cast would be clearer as Number of Cast Members.
• board post and Board Post should use consistent capitalization.
• There is not many left → There are not many left.
• In the in-character notice:
  • Arvest → Harvest
  • Yeilding → Yielding
  • azyet → as yet
  • emplore → implore
  • yous → you
  • arvest → harvest
  • Dar → There
  • pik → pick
• The misspellings in Orik’s notice may be intentional dialect. If so, retain them deliberately and consider noting that the spelling is character-specific.

Page 6 — “Greased Lightning!”

• Schedule: Board Post is inconsistent with Board Posting and Board elsewhere. Standardize the schedule/hook terminology.
• Requirements: dark → Requirements: Darkness or Requires darkness.
• lightning covered area → lightning-covered area
• 50 pieces needed - Ruby → 50 pieces needed. — Ruby
• The repeated board post should match the synopsis in wording, capitalization, and punctuation.

Page 7 — “What are thooooosssee?!?! ”

• Greased Lighting → Greased Lightning
• for this gather → for this gathering or for this event
• The exaggerated title spelling and punctuation appear intentional, but should be applied consistently as a stylistic choice.

Page 8 — “Like a Moth”

• non humanoid → non-humanoid
• If it enters a mod is ambiguous. Clarify whether mod means module or another game-specific term.
• Your goal of the monster → The monster's goal
• reenter → re-enter (or use return to the water)
• Clarify whether animals of all kinds and non-humanoid animals describe the same restriction.

Page 9 — “Mount Mole Hill”

• borrow → burrow
• They are about 3 feet wide, but all always filled in → They are about 3 feet wide, but are always filled in.
• surrounded it in pile → surrounded it in a pile or formed a pile around it
• Schedule:Board Post → Schedule: Board Post

Page 10 — “Bugging Out”

• Where ever → Wherever
• the trees are falling ill → the trees are becoming ill or the trees are dying
• There are (X NPCs) holes around the town → There are (X) holes around town. Use one placeholder format throughout.
• filled in holes → filled-in holes

Page 11 — “It’s a mole! It’s a Gnoll! No, wait. It’s f@#*d up!”

• Bodies and parts everywhere → Bodies and body parts are everywhere.
• zero eating of anything → nothing appears to have been eaten
• As they are standing and talking (and walking) is awkward. Rewrite for clarity.
• Sound starts → A sound begins or They hear a sound.
• The profanity in the title appears intentional, but confirm that it is appropriate for the document’s intended audience.

Page 12 — “Wrath of a Wraith”

• jelly like → jelly-like
• When it's pet is killed → When its pet is killed
• Your goal of the monster → The monster's goal
• reenter → re-enter (or use return to the water)
• Consider consistent formatting for Catfish #4, Bass #10, Crappie #2, Turtle #2.

Page 13 — “Pond Monster Spawning”

• Gigging animal fights is unclear. Consider Fights involving gigged animals.
• Run 4 times → Run four times, or use numerals consistently throughout.
• have spawned some monsters may be inaccurate if the monsters are summoned or attracted. Clarify the intended meaning.
• Choose from aquatic monsters → Choose an aquatic monster.

Document-wide inconsistencies

• Author: Brittney versus Author: Britt
• Board Posting, Board Post, and Board
• Missing spaces after colons, such as Author:Britt
• Inconsistent capitalization of labels, locations, and proper nouns
• Inconsistent punctuation in descriptions, synopses, and board notices
• Flee Point? would be more consistent as Flee Point:
• IG and OOG scene fields are blank throughout. Complete them or remove them if unused.
• Ensure proper nouns such as Carnis, TVV, Silt Stalkers, and Ruby are capitalized consistently.
• Placeholder formats should be standardized, especially (X NPCs) and (X) holes.
• Consider standardizing number style: either numerals or spelled-out numbers for values such as 4 and 50, except where game rules require numerals.